franklynjleaf: I dont even know why Im doing this. haha I made some edits. " ...even his subvert/undermine/remote Petrarchan language and ideas. Your point about rhetoric, for example, needed to be clarified- be more precise about the differences between the rhetorical strategies in both genres. Somehow, your point needed to be clarified or replased, and the agreement lost momentum a bit towards the end, but a solid attempt overall."
No, I am glad you did because I had no fucking idea what those last few lines were. THANK YOU <3 I think you’re pretty much right except for ‘even his’ was probably epyllia… and I only know that because it was in the title of my essay. You should look into a career at translating lecturer’s feedback.
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